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Wulf |
I, for one, am quite glad this is finally up. I had hoped for a more climactic battle with the final 'brother', but this works. And it's interesting that this one has blood when the other two didn't ;)
I miss Laiyos' dragon armor, though.
14 Apr 2005 04:23:30
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Anonymous |
Wow, I'm really impressed!! This is amazing work. Keep it up!
14 Apr 2005 07:50:24
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Aritoas |
Nice
14 Apr 2005 14:49:24
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Wraith |
I agree with wulf on the dragon armour thing but this is really good.well done!
18 Apr 2005 00:00:24
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Kai |
Great work, I'm new to this site, so at first I was a bit confused, heh but it still looks so great!
18 Apr 2005 06:02:44
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SuperWay |
Finally, the next page ;). The 3D is a bit ackward in my opinion. In frame 3 and 4 the expression just doesn't suit the situation. But or else it's great.
20 Apr 2005 04:49:00
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Calvin |
Got the works here! It's hot...but does it really go with page 30? I don't care!
06 May 2005 20:30:09
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BT |
Wow...what an amazing tansition, well done man! WELL DONE!!! However, wont this take you longer to update the comic with these insanely awesome pages?
15 May 2005 05:29:17
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GKar |
Hi Chris,
can't believe a hadn't see this page earlier!
It is really great! You know I would be glad to pay 3$ a month! As I hope many others.
As for the criticism, it's true the expressions aren't quite right, but the faces are expressives.
I think the blood shouldn't be there; seems strange...but i'll get used to it if it stays ;)
I'ts not perfect, but it's a great begining. I know with training and tools you can achieve the same level of perfection you got in 2D. Whenever the next pages will come, they will be always better and better.
22 May 2005 05:45:00
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Ripflame |
hi, i liked the 3D but im from mexico and i dont have the enough money to pay it every month you know im just a kid so ill been thankful if i dont have to pay for it thanks
26 May 2005 02:37:13
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3lfik |
Well, if u want constructive criticism .. this piece of work is good, but as you said urself, the 3D takes the dynamic out of it. It creates a distortion between the characters and the location, and switches the manga hero with a fake 3D calvin klein model ! Ur use of 3D is good but just doesnt mesh with the rest and therefore contrasts with the level of uy previous works wich was way up there.
If it's easier for you to finish the work this way, please do it cuz i still can,t wait for the next page, but as you know it, the quality of this artwork won't be as good as the first 30 pages !
Keep it up =D
01 Jun 2005 03:21:20
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random |
Its very good but the awesome pictures would take ages to creat which leaves fans waiting
03 Jun 2005 13:04:34
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Saiyan |
Nope on the contrary, a page is done 3-4 times faster this way. Its just that lately I have a BIG project I must finish by end of August, I simply CAN'T make new pages. I hope I can resume the pages more often starting this fall... Thanks for your comprehension and patience
03 Jun 2005 15:34:27
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ina |
the drawings were so perfect, i feel like the man with fire body really exist. this egan fellow is so great, can wait to experiance more from this site. keep up man.
10 Jun 2005 16:07:23
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Haven |
This is awsome for a 3D picture, though it took me a few minutes to realize that it was Laiyos and not someone new character that got the demon. I agree that your drawing is better, but if this is easier for you, then go ahead. The art's a treat, but I'm here for the great story!
22 Jun 2005 03:19:38
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Anonymous |
Really, don't worry about screwing a page here and there because like you said you'll never finish it. It won't matter if the story is really great, it's better to have finished work with flaws than a never finished work. Don't worry too much about how your characters look, the most important thing is to give them movement and expression, to make them look alive, even a 5 year olds' drawing can look good if it have movements and expressions. But then again, don't take hours just to get that perfect position :p. The art, except for movements and expressions, is no more than a candy to the eye. Just GO for it, you'll get better and better!
23 Jun 2005 23:04:43
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flyRfiX |
you are a real artist (do you really speak french)
06 Jul 2005 20:41:50
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r3d3 |
I like this page the best. the 3d characters and the backgrounds blend in. I vote for keeping this style..
01 Aug 2005 05:18:26
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tara |
for some reason : 3-D makes them look like vampires ... neva mind me ... i'm 'crazy'...
03 Aug 2005 06:36:42
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Red XIII |
i think you should of kept the dragon armor, and i was really thrown off when i saw it in 3D, but its really good
05 Sep 2005 10:23:33
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Phoenix |
The 3d is fantastic, but changing the artistry on the characters and the costumes was foolish and almost ruined the entire experience for me. The Dragon armor was awesome, and the hair styles could have stayed somewhat the same as well.
05 Sep 2005 10:34:49
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Phantom |
Its actually not that bad, except for no dragon armor of course
10 Sep 2005 05:56:39
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Smithy |
Laiyos looks a little too much like Christoff from vampire the masquerade. But thats my opinion, kudos for art though, looks great!
30 Sep 2005 22:23:42
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COOLCRASH |
love em the whole book is wicked so far
19 Oct 2005 03:05:33
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Wele |
Wow......I love it all and hope that you find time to continue. It took me a couple nights to get through.....but I was upset to see that it wasn't.....'finished'. Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for your next page ;)
29 Oct 2005 06:55:50
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Chrystal |
Love the comic!!!
Cannot wait to see and read the next one.
Keep up the Excellent Work :)
08 Nov 2005 06:03:25
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Raregolddragon |
Excellent that is all I can relly say for all the pages so far.
10 Nov 2005 05:42:59
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oriu |
you have mad skills and i would like to see the finished product
02 Jan 2006 06:33:47
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04 Jan 2006 16:53:35
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Raythian |
it wasnt that good, but it looks like it has the potential to be great, i understand that u didnt have everything you usually work with so theres some leeway. I dont like the transition in armor for laiyos though.
but all in all, good work for a first time! :)
10 Jan 2006 05:55:02
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manga-fan |
Honestly, I liked the drawings better!
12 Feb 2006 01:17:57
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manga-fan |
Dude... I really think you should change back to the drawings.I think people would like it moe,I know I did!^.^!
14 Feb 2006 05:00:58
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zinora hard core fan of manga |
that was a great manga I do hope it will get published I would be willing to by that anyday.You have the right attitude about draw and animating. I wish you all the luck in the world and then some. My sugestion to you though is e-mail your stuff to the publishing company's, just make sure you have the the legal documents to prove they are your work, try www.shonenjump.com the might be able to publish that for you.
17 Feb 2006 01:45:47
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05 Mar 2006 01:28:48
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ZO |
This is awsome!! I rarly surf the internet, but I enjoy anamie. This is the first time I've seen anything like this. I hope you find the time to continue. As far as the graphics, the story line kept me so intrested that most of the time I didn't even notice!!!
24 Mar 2006 20:45:44
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Sohrez |
Well thats better. I did not like the way you drew their faces before, but now he's kinda handsome :P keep it up
13 May 2006 15:58:36
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LN23 |
Hey, this is Miles's sis. This is very good. email my bro 4 my email and then i can give you Gregs email adress
14 May 2006 13:14:05
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Lord Dread |
This was my first time to this site and I read the whole comic in one go. As someone with his head half always in the world of fantasy I was v.intersted in your strip and actually looked up the page from a wallpaper of yours a friend of mine gave me. Though I think it's great all that you've done (far more than i'll probably ever do) If you really do welcome my honest opinion I dont belive you're creative writing skills are your greatist strength and didn't like the DBZ style of drawing believing it lacks origionality. I do however love your computer effects work, colouring, backgrounds and comic layouts. You used some solid scenes and often surprised me with your many excellent panels. For me though the switch to 3D and your work there with the efects and all were the best. I think this last page is the best in 3D because for me your characters become much more original and begin to take on a life of there own along with the story. I think from here on your strip is destined for new hights of brilliance and though I will post very few comments in the future I will be watching with great interest to see how you manga evolves. Yours with the greatest respect and admiration. D
23 May 2006 01:00:57
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Lord Dread |
This was my first time to this site and I read the whole comic in one go. As someone with his head half always in the world of fantasy I was v.intersted in your strip and actually looked up the page from a wallpaper of yours a friend of mine gave me. Though I think it's great all that you've done (far more than i'll probably ever do) If you really do welcome my honest opinion I dont belive you're creative writing skills are your greatist strength and didn't like the DBZ style of drawing believing it lacks origionality. I do however love your computer effects work, colouring, backgrounds and comic layouts. You used some solid scenes and often surprised me with your many excellent panels. For me though the switch to 3D and your work there with the efects and all were the best. I think this last page is the best in 3D because for me your characters become much more original and begin to take on a life of there own along with the story. I think from here on your strip is destined for new hights of brilliance and though I will post very few comments in the future I will be watching with great interest to see how you manga evolves. Yours with the greatest respect and admiration. D
23 May 2006 01:01:54
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Dark Realms Entertainment |
hey i like your work. My name is Andre, aka Dre, C.O. and founder of Dark Realms Entertainment. my company is in the launching stage and we need talented people to help with our first project (the creation of ENIGMA APOCALYPSE) it is a highly visual fully 3d fighting game like no other, and we need artist like u to help character designs and animation. there is alot of $$$ involve so email me and we can talk
12 Jun 2006 21:37:00
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Anonymous |
the main charavter was kinda ugly without 3d, but now he's HOT =) hee hee me like
17 Jul 2006 22:38:26
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