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Brent Schultz |
he knows the sacred art of zwee fighting...
oops. ^_^
Fantastic art, Chris, as always. :)
30 Mar 2004 11:29:03
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Vast |
I can never get over how awesome the villians look! You did another wonderful job Chris. ^_^
30 Mar 2004 14:30:56
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JM |
Great job, of course you make us impatient to see the next page :)
30 Mar 2004 21:25:31
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Cloud |
Hehe, as good (and late :) as I expected it to be: another masterpiece delivered and adding to this marvellous art! Anywho, I'd like to point out Eagan's face in the "Impossible! Where did he go?" frame, which doesn't look quite right, but I guess it's part of your style, as you seem to draw faces in that way on that view point/angle. The demons are fantastic, just pefect, machine-like but with a human touch (flaming robocops?) So, I expect to be seeing pages more regularly, ok? :)
And keep up the work and the chronicles!
30 Mar 2004 23:17:54
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Shinji |
Excellent page! The effect of the turning blades is good, but could have been more looking like blades. Still excellent! The demon disapearing is cool :)
31 Mar 2004 16:29:01
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Souloflight |
All the work and details on this are breathtaking :) Just the characters need a bit more work, you should try to make their chin less pointy (unless you like it that way :) ) and try to better align their eyes with the face, the eyes on Eagan on the 5th image should be more to the left. Just be carefull with faces and its perfect :)
01 Apr 2004 07:20:44
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Aritoas |
Really good.i like the background detail, but the dialog is slightly corny.i also think that you should work on your hero's facial proportions,otherwise it's good.hey waith,what you up to?why no reply yet?
02 Apr 2004 00:17:42
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BT |
loved it, be quicker next time, but if they come out as good as that...take your time...but be quicker next time hahaha
02 Apr 2004 09:28:12
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Saiyan |
Thanks for your comments. And no worries BT, I will be faster next time ;). As for the chin, I like my chins the way they are (and I like the way I do my eyes as well... though yes on the fifth frame, Egan's left eye looks a little higher than the right one and that's what maybe looks a little odd - which is something that wasn't so apparent in the sketch version of this frame)
03 Apr 2004 19:11:58
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Aphrodite |
wow, ur a true saiyan artist. Goku will be proud
04 Apr 2004 07:45:42
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HJM |
CHRIS!!!
GREAT as ALWAYS!!!
04 Apr 2004 20:57:14
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Wraith |
Cool. I dunno about anybody else but the dialog is fine, u just hav to hav the rite mind set. The demon in the 2,3+4 frame,the attack is slightly overdone in somethings, but you made it original-good 4 u. in the 1st frame Egan sud b in it cos if u look at it 4 the 1st time, u cud say that it came from someone else, just thought you'd like 2 know...
09 Apr 2004 13:46:08
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Reflexx |
Very good artwork, but a tad too much ... digital addings lol... well first frame where the swords are coming at the demons needs a bit more description ... showing their color and such. And the dude's chin in the "impossible" frame ... I'm not really feeling the chin... not hating just giving out point of views... And the eye thing like Cloud said I side with him on ... Good work though dude!
13 Apr 2004 10:05:29
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Keats |
Excellent work Chris. Very exciting story! Go on pleeeeaaase. :)
15 Apr 2004 12:08:41
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sephiroth |
ahhhhh a cliff hanger hurry and get the next page out cause i want to read it cause this an exelent manga i give it a 10
06 May 2004 21:59:38
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water_maiden |
niiiiccee...enjoyed reading ur manga. Keep going..
12 May 2004 01:45:48
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daedalus |
gut gelungen, nur finde ich schade das du dragonball nachmachst...
22 May 2004 02:16:08
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mick |
Can't wait!,can't wait for the next one. Excellent art work Chris.
27 May 2004 20:12:31
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Vash |
lol... well once again Chris you have left me with a cliff hanger... keep up the work on Egan. But just don't forget to work on your facial's on the other guys. (just thought i'd point that out coming from another artist ;) good luck chris.
20 Jun 2004 02:19:44
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FeatherBlade |
The perspective you have in the backgrounds is just amazing, as are the flame effects....the heroes always seem to be wearing the same facial expressions, though. Is this intentional? Cool comic, anyway.
01 Jul 2004 20:39:47
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28 Jul 2004 01:29:13
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vengeance |
i realy don't know what to say........ your backgrounds are amazing and so are you're demons but i just can't seem to figure out how you do the characters
when you see them full frontal and totally from the sides they are perfect they really are beautiful but like 3/4 or 1/4 from the sides i don't like it too much no ha it's bad though no, far from that ;-)
o and i translated what that german fellow said for you :"well done, yet i think it's a shame that you're imitating dragonball z"
i don't know if you speak german so..
anyway keep iup he good work i'll be checking his comic
28 Jul 2004 01:43:35
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J.W. |
Damn, Chris. You gotta stop drawing so good, I'm getting jealous here...
lol, J/K;-) Awesome work, bro. Keep up the good work!
20 Aug 2004 23:34:57
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Tyverius |
An absolutely excellent comic, yet I have to admit that this depresses me slightly. Why? Because you have, it seems for now, stopped writing it. I read a lot of webcomics, having no life to speak of, and this is one of the more impressive comics i have come across. Yes, the character art is reminiscent of DBZ, minor turn-off for me, but otherwise it is beautifully done and I would love to see this continued some day in the future.
07 Sep 2004 00:03:52
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Wraith |
id would have to agree with that statement, Tyverius. All this waiting, u neva no. Get the next page out pronto before it does a Harry Potter 5 stunt...
16 Sep 2004 14:44:33
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DragonLord |
I find your work very good. Every detail is excellent. I would say you have been drawing for quite a while? Do you sketch in the color or computerize it? Beautiful anyways.
Keep up the good work and the pages coming.
25 Oct 2004 07:55:53
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DragonLord |
I find your work very good. Every detail is excellent. I would say you have been drawing for quite a while? Do you sketch in the color or computerize it? Beautiful anyways.
Keep up the good work and the pages coming.
25 Oct 2004 07:56:04
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Jack Milo |
while i do wish you would update, I believe that this is a great comic and the artistry is awesome
05 Nov 2004 03:44:12
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John Sias |
I like your Otaku title it is great! I give it a 6 star dragon ball rating!
07 Dec 2004 04:56:57
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Anonymous |
A great dragonball Z clone...
11 Dec 2004 01:29:44
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john |
WHEN WILL THE NEXT ONE BE COMING OUT
21 Dec 2004 19:47:11
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Damien |
hey i just found your site today and i was looking over your mangas, i agree with everyone, they are great! hope you bring out the next one soon
22 Dec 2004 22:06:59
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Swerly |
Great manga.... Can't wait for the next page.. when it gonna be done.........
02 Jan 2005 04:34:11
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Mise |
Are you dead?
13 Jan 2005 04:05:06
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Kerry |
apparently yes he's dead, it's a pity the chronicles arent updated as often as the author promises (you are very inspired from dragon-ball, chris sayan !!).
PLZZZZZZ stop postponning delays and draw !!! BRING US WHAT'S COMING NEXT WE HAVE WAITED WAY TOO LONG NOW (ALMOST ONE YEAR *DOH*) !!!!!
19 Jan 2005 18:39:51
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Saiyan |
As announced on my news system, the Kyrian Chronicles are ON HOLD... and indefinitely I might add ! I TOTALLY understand that you're frustrated but there's very little I can do. I am struggling to make ENOUGH money to pay my rent and taxes and therefor I CANNOT just spend 20-30 hours per page just for the fun of it... try to understand that much. I am comtemplenting an option to continue the Chronicles but totally in 3D... it would mean a change of look of the characters, they would still remain as manga/anime as possible but there would be changes... but it would allow me to update more frequently and make a much better composition of my scenes... Please stop complaining as I don't really like the delays myself but there's NOTHING I can do about it these days... so please bear with me. Thanks for your comprehension
19 Jan 2005 19:33:52
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Anime God |
Awsome story-line and awsome art!! sorry to hear about your rent problems.
By an unrelated note: Anyone that plays "Rune: Halls of Valhalla" should look me up, my name is "Anime God"
05 Feb 2005 01:11:49
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trunks |
it was cool and i want to see what happenes to that guy with the white hair
08 Feb 2005 06:24:38
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Wilymo |
this is excellent dude just hurry up..lol jj
10 Feb 2005 08:26:39
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puma-anime |
nice,nice,nice:) i am a young mangaka!i came from Bosnia and Hercegovina!i have a web manga page too! http://www.puma-anime.i8.com i hope u like it:)
11 Feb 2005 03:31:40
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hi |
hi kool stuff hi
24 Mar 2005 02:58:43
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Anonymous |
I think the whole Chronicle is great. It is fascinating and once I got to this site I just wanted to keep reading and it took over my mind with what will happen next. Great Job man.
01 Apr 2005 07:11:39
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Jin |
Laiyos would have looked better in red and black and the blade design is nice but not pefect to me , but nice katanas definitley.
12 Apr 2005 05:46:18
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