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Andrew Stagg |
Nice,...very nice
19 Jan 2004 07:34:53
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Wraith |
Very good! Could u mayb fix frame 2 and egans hand in frame 4? but overall it is exellent.
19 Jan 2004 15:04:53
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GKar |
Very nice! the last demon don't seem to have a very long time to live...
Perfect continuation of the move! I like it!
The whole action rocks like hell!!
Oh, and the sand clouds effect in the 2nd and specially last frame is cool!
Hope you are feeling better?
19 Jan 2004 18:05:21
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GKar |
The 'Boom's in the 1st frame are strange; I don't know exactly, but the transparency doesn't look the same depending where you look...anyway, the result is not that good here. I think it would be better not transparent.
Wraith: what's wrong with the 2nd frame?
There is something 'unfinished' with his right hand in last frame, I agree. But i find the left one very good!
19 Jan 2004 18:28:32
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SuperWay |
Very nice job Chris. I agree in that the hands to Egan in the last frame are in a bit strange position. But overall this page is very good.
Hope you wasn't too sick lately. Don't want a great drawer like you have a bad health :D Stay healthy and well, and have a good time w/ your next page. (Can't wait...! I looked for a new page every 2nd day when you told it was delayed:P)
20 Jan 2004 00:23:58
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Shadow |
Awesome, very cool indeed, I love the "eye" things that Egan has going.....very warriorific.....hm... I made a new word.. TAKE THAT, WEBSTER!
20 Jan 2004 06:02:44
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mick |
As Shadow said " love the eyes " AWESOME page Chris
20 Jan 2004 06:09:49
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Codexus |
Very nice! I really like how you did the eyes! And I hope we'll see more pages soon ^^
20 Jan 2004 12:07:31
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Shinji |
At first look, I would give a 10. But if you look closer, they are a lot of little imperfections to my point of view:
> Left leg in the the last frame looks too long
> Position in the 3rd fram isn;t that good, and the biceps looks to big for a straighten arm
> The arms in the last frame looks to tiny.
But the overall look of this page just looks excellent. Great work. GKar, tu dis koi? Elle est parfaite la 1ere frame! La moquette de mauvaise qualité donne des allucinations ;)
21 Jan 2004 00:53:23
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GKar |
Shinji: Je ne repproche rien à l'image elle-même, je trouve juste que les lettres gachent un peu; tout ces traits qui se croisent...
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Pis toutes ces mouches aussi, ca gene un peu ;)
21 Jan 2004 19:04:12
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Aritoas |
it's good,but still moving too slowly.it would be better if you didn't fill every frame with all the slightest motions taken by the characters.otherwise the graphic images are looking much better.i also like the whole 'eye' thing.wraith,benster says "hi" and look!, no typo's!
21 Jan 2004 19:36:48
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GKar |
Shinji: Je ne repproche rien à l'image elle-même, je trouve juste que les lettres gachent un peu; tout ces traits qui se croisent...
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Pis toutes ces mouches aussi, ca gene un peu ;)
21 Jan 2004 22:57:23
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Cloud |
Hey, Chris. Very cool page! Overall it's exellent but I agree with shinji about the small imperfections: the right hand, the contracted biceps on a straight arm (maybe Egan's just really muscular :)
But overall it's great and I hope to see the next page soon! Hope you're feeling better....
22 Jan 2004 05:03:01
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Ray |
Excellent done!!! Very good, keep you head right in the air!!! This is the smell of success!!! Very well done Chris!!!
PS: It's very hard for me to wait 'till your next page is online!!! I want to know hot it goes on!!!!
22 Jan 2004 17:49:56
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BT |
I love it! it continues very well after the last page and like everyone is saying, the eyes are awesome! with the imperfections, they're pretty mild so don't worry about them. keep up the good work!
26 Jan 2004 08:31:42
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Alejandro |
I just crash in to this site today (and by far dont regrreete it), so my coment, goes more in general than for the last page itself. You should make the caracters interact with the enviroment, I mean with the landscape, i.e. leaving tracks as the move, breaking stones as they fight, etc. This will melt the manga-made characters with the rest of the frame, instead of looking just like posted there. So far this has been done only once, when the first deemon died and grabed the sand. Offcourse I dont suggest you to do it allways, but from time to time will help.
Grat job! keep going, and thanks for taking in to account "fans" comments, thats the best way to lern.
26 Jan 2004 22:40:42
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t3chb0y |
damn it man you're so good I can't wait for the next page
31 Jan 2004 03:29:02
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Roy |
No offence, the eyes are sort of dodgy, but the rest of it is very good. ^_^
31 Jan 2004 03:36:28
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material |
wow i love you and your pictures
01 Feb 2004 21:12:26
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-=Master=- |
As usual Chris u deliver the goods,
Very nice bud :)
04 Feb 2004 01:07:13
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Maverick |
I love the way you draw. You are so awesome at the anime. I am very impressed. Oh yes...megan says hello :)
04 Feb 2004 21:30:42
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someone |
hahahah look on the right hand!the finger is cut in half
09 Feb 2004 16:50:57
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KllerZoo |
but it should go on.
16 Feb 2004 15:48:56
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Saiyan |
KllerZoo : it will... it's been too busy lately, but I intend to involve lot of my time on page 30 next week. Thx for your patience
16 Feb 2004 15:55:53
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Robert |
Hey i really love the artwork in this one.. the action that he throws away his swords.. nice.. just like 2 pages back *or 3?* where he jumps in the air.. very nice.. could you tell me which program you used for the demons?
17 Feb 2004 21:57:54
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Nimesh |
You have one of the best online comic!!!
keep up the good work!!!
I simply love the grapic images!!!!!!PERFECT!!!
18 Feb 2004 05:19:39
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Gringo |
Nice job man, too many "Shliiiing"'s for my liking, but you seem to be getting better.
29 Feb 2004 22:04:07
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nobody |
when com the next page
03 Mar 2004 21:33:03
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shido |
you should imrprove your eyes you know
10 Mar 2004 04:47:25
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Wilymo |
as always great job..im 13 by the way
10 Feb 2005 08:24:20
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