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Shadow |
YAY! once again I am the first to vote.
Yeah this rocks....cool little flip action goin on..I like it.
17 Nov 2003 10:05:44
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Lochaber Axe |
I know I'm always criticizing, but I mean for it to be constructive. I do this cause you have the potential to make it big. Anyhow, the first panel is... too... angular? It gives him a bestial look kinda. Excellent on everything else.
17 Nov 2003 10:27:02
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KC_Artist |
silly DBZ fans :D
17 Nov 2003 12:15:27
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Wraith |
oh my GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is so cool! Its really awesome, u've definitly gone all out on this one! The movement is so realistic! The 3rd panel with Egan as he comes over needs a bit more detail, but other than that, ITS PERFECT! =)
17 Nov 2003 14:45:41
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GKar |
This page really rocks!! The action is very well rendered! I would agree tough with the comment from Lochaber Axe concerning the 1st frame. I also noticed you tried to make the swords look more metal-like in this frame. I would say if you don't intend to do it on eachh frame, don't do it at all.
But anyway, Excellent page!!
17 Nov 2003 14:58:10
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Saiyan |
I agree about the first frame. As for the swords, I need to make them more "silverlike" and in the first frame one reflects Egan face, the other the mountains... it's very faint, but still there :). I'll find a way to make it look better in time. Lochaber Axe (and everyone else) : never hold on criticism, I need those constructive comments to help me get better, so don't worry and keep at it (be critic all the way !) :). Thx everyone.
17 Nov 2003 17:49:57
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GKar |
How nice! I didn't recognize Egan on his sword!! :D And the landscape! It is better than I tought after all...
17 Nov 2003 21:58:29
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good |
you are getting better!
17 Nov 2003 23:56:27
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Cloud |
Once again a great page. I do agree with Lochaber about the first frame, and I think the reflections on the swords are pretty good as they are (perhaps just a bit more noticeable), but they're great cause they keep the shinyness of the metal. Keep up the great work!
18 Nov 2003 00:54:23
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Vast |
I think this page rocks. The second small frame has to be my favorite however, since it is noticeably a hard angle to draw. I think you did a great job once again. ^_^
19 Nov 2003 06:03:39
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mick |
Great work Chris! keep em coming.
19 Nov 2003 12:21:52
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DemenZ |
Hey,
it's a great work, i like to see more, i hope you working still on the manga ;-)
i'm very lucky that my english is enough to read that, i'm from german.
also, i came back, that's a promise!!
cya
19 Nov 2003 15:36:01
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SuperWay |
This is great. I like it, just as all the other pages. Great work Chris.
19 Nov 2003 21:36:31
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Roy |
Love the flip and the leg action in box 2!
21 Nov 2003 13:50:56
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Aritoas |
i agree with wraith.it does need a little more detail.i can't really define the pants from the shoes and the sword needs a little light shining off it.other than that it's great.it's really come a long way.by the way, the person named GOOD, why did you give such a low rating.i'm sure you couldn't do much better.
21 Nov 2003 19:16:25
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-=*Master*=- |
Excellent, again Chris. The first shot of the face my as Gkar put it, look a little angular but think about it, if your'e best friend got mangled before your'e very eyes. I'd say that your'e face would be that distorted with anger too! Try it.
21 Nov 2003 22:25:57
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nensha |
okay, now i'm hooked ;)
pretty heavy on the Dragonball Z influence aren't you? Laiyos looks like Vegeta. I like Egan's looks more.
I love the visuals, the image of the fire-demon will stay in my head for quite some time. I also love the Dragon. All the details are delightful. I'm very, very impressed.
Great job, Chris!
22 Nov 2003 20:47:31
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--::Barnes::-- |
Who ever said white man can't jump
25 Nov 2003 11:55:46
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anīme |
your anīme rocks its even better than the dragon ball serīes
26 Nov 2003 08:44:25
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SuperWay |
I agree pretty much on the first comments here. If I didnt know better I would think that he changed sword from the first image to the others! If your going to make the swords like that, make it like that all the time. On the first it's shiny and reflects, and have a bright color. But then suddenly they're grey and in another metal (It looks like it :),).
Anyway your backgrounds are realy good, so are the rest too. I'm not voting this time cuz i've already voted somewhere over here. Keep up the good work Chris. (can't wait till the next page comes.)
28 Nov 2003 00:54:08
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05 Jan 2004 21:52:58
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Saiyan |
Anonymous : Very objective, thank you Mr. coward !
05 Jan 2004 22:25:35
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Kitori |
wow! So cool! As for Anonymous guy, their just jelous of you :P But I love this pic, I hope he doesn't die
02 Oct 2004 06:32:20
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WilyMo |
um...im just postin my thoughts cuz of the anonymous guy...he dropped the rating of this page and i like it..good job :)
10 Feb 2005 08:18:36
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Anonymous |
nice
10 Mar 2005 08:20:34
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Red XIII |
i....im....im spechless....no really....i cant say much more about this page other then that its perfect
05 Sep 2005 10:27:08
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