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Druzella |
It is a very good page, but please don't tell me that Laiyos is dead? He is like the main character of the story.
20 Oct 2003 03:20:19
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GKar |
Wow! Damn! That must have hurt!
Very cool page. nicely done Chris :)
20 Oct 2003 04:18:11
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Shadow |
LAIYOS NO!! All that pretty hair..
BURNT TO A CINDER!
Let Shadow put a bandade on it and make it all better.
Man Chris...So violent...DAMN THE SUSPENCE!!!
20 Oct 2003 05:02:15
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Lochaber Axe |
Don't worry Druzella... unless Saiyan decides to take a page out of Yu Yu Hakusho (or dbz; whichever you want to use) Laiyos shouldn't die. The only problem is the onomatopeia (damn that is a hard word to type). The sword should have went SHIIII or something on those lines. I'm a buff when it comes to military history and weapons, I plan to get a claymore one of these days (watch Braveheart that is the sword Mel Gibson hacks away with). Sorry if I sound to critical. Great job and I love your manga.
20 Oct 2003 07:48:00
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Lochaber Axe |
Yeesh... that was some pompous prattle I just wrote. Thats what I like to call whiplash writing; a stop and go way of torturing ones written language. Heh... sorry about that.
20 Oct 2003 08:10:14
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Cloud |
Wow, you're getting better and better with each page, chris. It's hard to explain, but this is your most "powerful" page so far, it's really well done.
It's great news to hear that you're gonna dedicate more time to the KC's...
Keep up the good work!
20 Oct 2003 21:35:57
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Steve |
I agree with Lochaber Axe about the onomatopeia, but other than that it's pretty good. I look forward to some nice revenge @$$kicking.
21 Oct 2003 01:53:34
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Vast |
So violent.. and so brutal. This has to be one of my favorite pages! The frame where Egan is clenching his teeth rocks, and it's my favorite frame... for some odd reason. :) It's another beautiful page as always Chris. ^_^
21 Oct 2003 04:25:02
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Wraith |
Hes not DEAD!!!! I think the picture of Laiyos could have been a little more drastic, catch my drift? also u could have also done a frame with Laiyos on his knees. I am in love with the picture of Egan clenching his teeth! Man, i wouldn't wanna b 1 of those fire Demons! Go Egan! Kick thier asses back to the eternal pits of HELL!!!!!!!!
22 Oct 2003 14:52:12
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Aritoas |
He can be dead!he's soooo hot! (i'm a girl, incase you haven't noticed). I agree with Wraith, it could have been a bit more dramatic.
22 Oct 2003 19:11:03
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Shinji |
I'm totally agree with Cloud: this page is the most "powerfull" you've done so far, the first frame amazes me as well as the left one.. But I really thought that Laiyos will dodge it :)
Was he day dreaming like Badaku?
See ya soon, my friend.
22 Oct 2003 20:08:17
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Shinji |
btw, do you know that page 25 does not appear on the homepage as thumbnail?
22 Oct 2003 20:11:00
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Saiyan |
Thanks everyone. Shinji : I know :), I need to fix the code on the main page, but I didn't get a single second lately... I'll do that over the week-end.
23 Oct 2003 01:47:48
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SamuraiXblack |
i was wondering if i could use your manga in a class project.I have to create a buisness and mines a manga mag of my fav online manga.
thx
24 Oct 2003 02:14:37
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Yuyuyama |
I.... hummmm... basically I have nothing to say, well maybe one thing: WOW! You go man!
24 Oct 2003 02:59:05
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Hubi |
It's another great page!
25 Oct 2003 16:00:16
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Nephiline |
Only just discovered this site... What have I been doing!!! You are one of the best artists I've ever seen- this is amazing- I'll be here on 3rd November!!!
29 Oct 2003 22:23:06
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Eddie Manuel |
Just work on your art style more and you'll be one of the best!!
03 Nov 2003 23:38:10
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Le |
Gets destroyed in the dream... almost gets blindsided by a fire dude... and gets whacked with a fireball.... laiyos or whatever kinda sucks, no wonder he needs a group to go along with him in this journey. =P
Anyways, sweet cg work, i agree with eddie though in that your art style may be lacking, but hey maybe thats your style. As for the story, its kinda cliche and overdone, but enjoyable. Sweet job though man, keep it up. 10+
04 Nov 2003 16:52:09
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Saiyan |
Le : Thanks for the comments. Yes it's my style, lacking or not :), but no worries, I intend to get better ya know... hehe. As for the story, I think it's a bit premature after 26 page to talk about the story... so far it's pretty conventional, but I have plans :), I simply don't want to reveal them after a few pages...
04 Nov 2003 18:01:41
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Anonymous |
No offence, but what a load of crap...
Some really bad DBZ drawings...
Here's some advise, go buy a book on anatomy and go follow some art classes...oh and get a style of your own, not just copy the ugliest anime/manga series ever made
04 Nov 2003 23:57:31
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Saiyan |
Anonymous : None taken. No offense either but in life there is a thing called taste. I can't please everyone... I actually try to please myself first, then if it pleases others then I'm happy. And if some people hate it : I can't do anything against it. By the way, there's a difference between liking something and plain accusing it of being crap... one is called constructive criticism, the other is pure unfounded flaming, try to be open-minded a little, it won't bite you and you'll sleep just as well.
05 Nov 2003 05:21:51
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Jenai |
yes i do agree it looks a bit like dbz..but is that so bad...!? newayz i like it and i think its awsome your doing this for everyone to see..........{no blood?}
05 Nov 2003 11:26:25
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Raven |
It reminds me of trunks in dbz!
29 Nov 2003 13:56:16
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SoulBlade2 |
you got to admit he does look like gohan in this picture.....and i think its ...
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
09 Feb 2004 16:05:17
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Kitori |
no meaning to laugh but, lol how did they not see that fire ball from hell comming?
02 Oct 2004 06:29:53
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