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$hAdoW |
hey chris, long time no see, there is something rong with the arm ... but , it is still a super pic, as always :D BYEBYE
see ya soon
01 Jul 2003 04:22:35
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Stormbringer |
I really enjoy your manga Chris. Good Work
01 Jul 2003 11:15:08
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Logan |
Hey Chris your Manga is very cool!
How do you get the ideas of the Characters and story? And I bet it will make a real great Anime too!
01 Jul 2003 11:48:10
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Saiyan |
thanks everyone. Logan : I get it from my imagination... sometimes before I sleep or as I walk in the streets, bits and pieces of storyline, characters, attacks, fight scenes, they all come to me as "random thoughts" as I let my imagination wander.
01 Jul 2003 13:38:25
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GKar |
Excellent Chris! Funny, in the last image, with the white sparcle near his eyes, the demon almost seems to cry!
I like this page very much, but I have to agree that there is a problem with the arm position in 1st image. Have a look also at the background if the last image; even if the point of view may have changed a little, we should find the same details in the landscape.
01 Jul 2003 22:23:44
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Saiyan |
G'Kar : I don't believe there is something wrong with the arm itself... but more in the way Laiyos is holding his swords... the angle in which the sword in thrown at and gripped at... well, I think :). Thanks.
02 Jul 2003 00:14:59
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Dra'Co |
it was worth waiting sometime for this page. i love this story!!!
02 Jul 2003 01:07:20
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J.A.D. |
well well well, the big event:P what evry one was wainting for since... since... euh,... :P:P hihi good work chris it is a real nice one i like the effects... LADIES AND GENTELMEN: WELCOME BACK TO THE KYRIAN CHRONICLES :p ... U diserve 9.. but here u go a 10 just to encourage u :)
02 Jul 2003 12:48:36
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GKar |
I think you're right about the arm, the problem is the hand (I tried, but it's hard to tell exactly what could be changed, perhaps the thumb position is the problem). And I think I was wrong about the background. And I like the new flames traces in the first image. Did you also changed smtg in the below images (besides the texts)? It's hard to tell without comparing, but I think so.
Anyway, again, great work Chris.
02 Jul 2003 15:49:49
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jay |
I really like the details on the eyes. Especially how they sort of bleed.
-J
02 Jul 2003 20:09:06
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Cep |
Excellent, was really worth the waiting.
I love those "flame demons".
Again, great details, wonderfull colors.
Keep up ...
02 Jul 2003 21:34:40
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Saiyan |
GKar : Yes I did make a major change on the first demon shot, it's much more closer to the "camera" now. The other changes are about some details in the flame demon itself, nothing big.
04 Jul 2003 14:30:36
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Shadow Veranda |
::one day a girl stumbled apon a certain web site and met GOD!::
I am a HUGE DBZ fan..(Vegeta obsession)
I write..I draw(good) But for the love of everything that is Holy...I LOVE YOUR MANGA ::gets on her knees::
I AM NOT WORTHY!
PS. Egan is hot...reminds me of Legolas as a Saiyan... ;) ^(-_-)> :Kirby salutes you:
06 Jul 2003 02:21:36
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SSDragon |
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!
06 Jul 2003 06:40:12
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Hubi |
It's brilliant Chris !!!
07 Jul 2003 02:39:28
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The Critic |
IMO your Photoshop is outdated, btw you can be tutored at the old folks home on 99 crazy man st anyday form 8-10 with free lunch and B-I-N-G-O!
BTW I like the colors, what is that fuschia(sp?)?
08 Jul 2003 23:46:43
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General Mills |
LucKY CAN AND WiLL COME AFTER YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
11 Jul 2003 10:57:30
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Fallen Angel |
Whow, now that is a really great comic till now!!! You really 've done great work!!!!! Waiting for the next page!
19 Jul 2003 19:51:37
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SamuraiXKenshin |
Awe breaking!!!! Perfect!!! Marvelous!!!! You should go pro
23 Jul 2003 20:14:58
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Cloud |
Well, there's no way to describe it, it's incredible! The last picture of the demon is simply perfect! You should really think of publishing this comic when it's finished (though we might all be dead by the time that happens ;) Keep up the good work, and keep fighting the heat!
27 Jul 2003 01:54:20
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TJ |
This is incredible.
28 Jul 2003 00:58:36
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gyver |
where is the nex ne
30 Jul 2003 03:39:02
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sdm777 |
Wow! Outstanding manga. I was hooked after reading the first page. The art alone is incredible. I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. Keep it up!!!!
~Bard
01 Aug 2003 13:10:47
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J.W. |
Awsome artwork over all! You got quite the talent there, bub. Backgrounds and effects are the best! May yer talent continue fellow manga-fan!
11 Aug 2003 03:44:32
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Squall Leonhart |
Its brilliant i love it!!!!!!! the flame demon is awsome!!!
12 Aug 2003 02:19:15
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junpei |
simply amazing, god your a very talented artist i wish i was as good as you. you got skill. ummm i know this is kinda weird but coulde you make me your apprentice it woulde mean so much to me. any way very griping and amazing story full of suspense.. thanks your manga amazing
26 Aug 2003 10:34:06
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Killikk |
........Kick ass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I especially like the fire demons!!!!!(massive pyro!!!)
simply amazing, love it. I have never been able to find a better manga since Megatokyo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
31 Aug 2003 09:57:36
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Kenshin |
I'm a huge dbz and rk fan. Sure I've written a rather long dbz fan-fic and even drewup some new (very good) characters for it... Much to learn have I.
20 Sep 2003 22:15:53
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Wraith |
Cant give you a 10 this time, sorry again! Egan needs some touch ups with his facial expressions, otherwise the first frame is exellent!!! Laiyos looks so main in this page!! terrific stuff!=)
14 Oct 2003 18:57:59
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Jenai |
ya the thumb has 2 joints but who really cares, it dosent totally ruin it keep working your don great
05 Nov 2003 10:50:59
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--::Barnes::-- |
sucked in you bloody demon, suck on that... sorry getting carried away i just love this manga so much
25 Nov 2003 11:40:41
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Same |
Once again. Brilliant! I one day plan on making a manga like this too. I just wanted to know, what program do you work in?:>)
18 Apr 2004 07:47:11
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Saiyan |
Same : Thanks. I use Photoshop mainly.
18 Apr 2004 17:30:02
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Kitori |
wow it seems like every time i give a suggestion,m you have already accomplished it, i love the details in the face of the fire creature, very detailed!
02 Oct 2004 06:21:52
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