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Shinji |
This page is fabulous! The last picture is Perfect!! .... It leaves me speechless.... Chris, this is excellent, keep up the good work!
11 May 2003 00:04:32
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Zick |
Very good! Laiyo's face close-up is great!
On the drawing side, this page is great, what bothers me tough is the dialogue; even after a couple reads, all I can think is "???". It seems to have no link at all with the other pages!! Realy, at first I thought "Have I missed a page in between?" I think this kind of change of tone in the dialogue is too drastic and should be avoided at all cost. The hero and main character's behavior should be a rather straight and constant guiding line that the reader can safely find each time he sees or reads about his favorite characters.
11 May 2003 00:45:24
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Cloud |
What can I say? Exellent, as always! The dialogue is a bit confusing at times, it seems to jump forward a bit too quickly, but I guess it would take lots of pages (time) to include more dialogue and explian things more clearly. (Or perhaps you want to keep that confusing Matrix-like feel, as on page 4 you said you liked that)
11 May 2003 02:19:37
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Cloud |
Oops, i forgot to rate it, sorry :)
PD: I went to see Children of Bodom last night! They were INCREDIBLE! Oh, Downfall, oh Kissing the Shadows! I have seen CoB, now I can die happy ;)
11 May 2003 02:36:03
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Wildcard |
You did a very nice job on the lightning. I can see you're getting better at designing every page.. :). anyway check your ICQ.
11 May 2003 03:35:24
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game |
are you still making that game?
11 May 2003 07:08:25
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Saiyan |
Thanks everyone. As for your questions, nope I'm not making that game anymore (since ages). Zick : if you put the two pages one after the other I don't see why they don't follow... I don't see what bothers you in the dialogue... the same thing said here in details is what was said in the previous page... it's just more dramatically layed down... that's all. Anyway it will make sense with page 18, I was a bit unhappy to leave it that way cause Egan answers Laiyos' question... but that's for next week I guess :). Also, the characters are barely known yet, I'm simply building a background story to situate them.
11 May 2003 08:15:47
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GKar |
This page is marvellous! And this last image is definetly a masterpiece! I don't see the problem of Zick ... The change of tone is just reflecting the gravity of their subject and makes perfectly sense.
Laiyos' feelings are very well rendered :)
12 May 2003 04:25:53
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Saiyan |
About the dialogue, I'm making some minor changes (nicer sentences and better punctuation), I'll upload it soon.
12 May 2003 04:53:09
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Cep |
Awesome, like always.
Specially the third picture.
I don't know how, but with each page
you manage to be more impressive.
At each page i think you wont be able to do as well or better, and yet you do it every time :-)
12 May 2003 14:23:28
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JM |
It totally rocks !!! Every scene is very intense, that would do a great movie without changing ANYthing ! So you get a "perfect" :)
To have a new page per week makes us wait to understand what our heroes are talking about, so I don't see any problem about the dialogue. I just hope we'll learn some more about Laiyo's suffering...
12 May 2003 15:10:58
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Cthulhu |
in my opinion,too powerful to be rated.
excellent work,chris!!
someone should make a metal concept album from this(heard mike's in a band)
the only thing keeping this from a perfect score is the HAIR,and their chis are too...pointy.
12 May 2003 20:12:43
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Cthulhu |
in my opinion,too powerful to be rated.
excellent work,chris!!
someone should make a metal concept album from this(heard mike's in a band)
the only thing keeping this from a perfect score is the HAIR,and their chis are too...pointy.
12 May 2003 20:13:27
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Vast |
I'm a little late yeah? ^_^ That third frame is so awesome! The detail you do on Laiyos' armor is really incredible, and the close up of his face in that very frame is quite stunning. :) I'm really looking forward to the next page.
13 May 2003 05:34:32
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SSDragon |
Love the contrast between the bright background and Laiyos's darker thoughts.
29 May 2003 20:22:45
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Hubi |
I think the hard work was worth it :-)
GREAT STUFF!
08 Jun 2003 19:36:46
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Anonymous |
19 Jun 2003 07:18:19
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Wraith |
Im on the verge of tears...
13 Oct 2003 14:39:11
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Anonymous |
DAmN I LOVE LAYIOS HAIR!
24 Oct 2003 00:23:07
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ed |
amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
24 May 2005 19:24:06
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manga-fan |
You need to do somthing on your website to teach people how to draw your characters!!!!
12 Feb 2006 01:02:18
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