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Vast |
Have I stressed enough on Laiyo's attire? It's just too awesome! :D The back shot of him looks great, and I really think that frame comments a lot on what he's feeling. The first frame, however, has to be my favorite on this page. Full body shots express a lot in my opinion, besides the amount of detail pertaining to the particular scene. The story is getting really good, and I can't wait to read more. ^_^ Keep up the great work.
02 May 2003 11:59:26
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Zick |
Whoa! Now, that's what we need! Reading this page takes you right to those mighty plains and valleys that are the beautyfull trademark of Heroic-Fantasy, in this case the Delendis' plains... This scenery is great! Good job on the expressions and the body posture too!
02 May 2003 12:27:17
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GKar |
Whoofff... This landscape is great! And you seem to be mastering your characters in any position/distance. The amount of details is amazing, the expressions and posture are truly realistic.
02 May 2003 13:51:19
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Saiyan |
Thanks everyone :), I'm very happy you like it. It's something new for me to put characters into normal and natural sets with bright colors (and shiny day :)), I wasn't sure it how it would turn out.
02 May 2003 15:17:53
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Cloud |
Wow, a sudden change of sets in this page, it was really "confusing" to see Laiyos in a bright day in the middle of a green valley, a very sudden change of atmosphere from the dark beggining. I LOVE IT! ;)
02 May 2003 16:56:44
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JM |
The dark pages before make this one very powerfull. Amazing change of atmosphere, I can ear the birds out there :)
12 May 2003 15:22:32
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SSDragon |
Great setting!
29 May 2003 20:19:03
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Hubi |
What an awesome landscape!
VERY GOOD INDEED ...a living kiss of nature :-)
08 Jun 2003 19:34:43
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was inside |
19 Jun 2003 07:17:33
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Herten |
Hmmm, interesting page :-) Does this "Alan" make reference to somebody we might know somehow ? If I'm not wrong, then it's a nice way to say Farewell (and it deserves a 10 for this).
;-)
11 Oct 2003 22:51:33
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Saiyan |
Herten : It is indeed a reference... I can't say more without compromising the storyline though ;).
11 Oct 2003 23:52:35
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Wraith |
Detail deserves a 20!!! its exellent!!! The back view in frame 3 is atomic! Aaaaaaawesoooommmmeee!!!
12 Oct 2003 11:46:57
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Janne |
I just want to say.. I do some comicdrawings and.. in the first picture those speech-bubbles i think is not so good placed. you see.. you read from left too right.. and from up too down, so i think the characters and the speech-bubbles shall change place.. so you read them correctly.. cuz I read in the wrong way first and i did'nt follow so good.
Hope you did understand = im from sweden
24 Oct 2003 00:19:58
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yugimotou |
Great storyline, excellent detail and the attire is so cool. Great work
06 Dec 2004 10:01:12
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Janne |
I also want to say You are bad a drawing a little monkey could do better Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha loser.
06 Apr 2005 02:35:55
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Jim Holten |
Sorry about what my brother has been writnig i walked in and he was writing all this stupid stuff I'll make sure i dosn;t happen again. :)
06 Apr 2005 02:38:17
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manga-fan |
Dude did you do the background?If you did I don't give you a 10.... I give you a 120!
12 Feb 2006 00:59:35
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