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J.A.D. |
well maybe this page will have a low rating, well it is just becoause it is empty and there is nothin of impressive, now offcourse u can't do evry page to be perfect, no one can do that,it is impossible noone is perfect, but let's give each page her right, this page is kinda empty, there is only a small dialogue, it don't deserve more then 7. hey just one thing: i am a martial arter and i have the black belt, well that kick hihi, it is impossible to cick such one in the way that the bad guy is standing, unless if when he kicked Kraiyan he brocked his leg and she turned to left, well that's all we are here to help and to give our opinions right? so just to help and to let our story succed even in the small details, mhmhm standing to my knowldge in martial arts, in this case and in this position, the leg should be completly straight, or the leg is directly broken! try to do it better next time my friend:d
20 Jan 2003 22:30:18
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Shinji |
The kick may be wrong to an expert, but the position and the effect are excellent.
No need for a dialog with a fighting scene: it mean to be fast, no time to think.... It is a great page!
21 Jan 2003 00:57:06
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Cloud |
Well, another great page Chris, although the leg's weird position is what keeps me from rating a ten. (Although sometimes when I look at the picture it seems okay but after a second it seems weird again) Apart from that detail, which I don't think is that much to worry about, the rest is simply great.
21 Jan 2003 01:25:36
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GKar |
Apart the small anatomic problem, this page is of great quality.
To be honest Chris, I think there's also still a problem with some of the movements effects. For 'the bad guy' it's ok, but for Laiyos they are misplaced. We don't see the direction his body is taking (even if we know it from the kick)
21 Jan 2003 22:41:50
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Hubi |
A bit too cruel... ;-)
This will cost you one point my friend!
But it's certainly great!!!
22 Jan 2003 02:00:05
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| 10 |
$hAdoW |
very nice kick ,it remeber me my taekwondo lessons =) very nice,chris
like always =)
23 Jan 2003 02:03:31
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JM |
We can really feel Laiyos pain ! I agree about the leg's position/movement problem...
23 Jan 2003 19:01:16
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Art |
Hello everyone! I agree with GKar that the movements effects are improving but are still not up to the quality of the drawing. I see the leg move as a side kick (the two feet must be parallel), so IMHO the anatomy problem would rather be due to the proportions of the limbs vs the torso...
23 Jan 2003 23:26:45
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Saiyan |
Thanks for all the comments. Now as per the possibility of the kick being done or not... first of all Kyria is not Earth, so maybe that kind of kick is easy to do for Kyrians :). But more importantly, I meant this kick to be a vertical one at first (meaning it went fist by bending the knee and then extending the foot up). That would be a kind of high yokogeri (in karate terms), but in ended up as a "not-so-easy-to-achieve" merge of yoko and mawashigeri :). But I felt it added more dynamic / drama with this circle movement. Now... on a personal note : I'm pretty sure that Jet Li can do this kind of kick :) ... maybe he's a Kyrian... who knows... LOL.
J.A.D. : This is an action scene... it was meant to be something focused on a specific action, that's why it may seem empty to you, but it ain't empty... it's just action focused. :)
24 Jan 2003 19:54:32
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Cloud |
Well, after your comment, Chris, I changed my mind. It's true that Kiria is a different planet to Earth, so things must work differently there... and after all this is fiction, there's no real need for every detail to be perfect and realistic. Keep working Chris, you're doing it great!
27 Jan 2003 02:19:23
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Vitani |
I get this tingly feeling when I look at your artwork...it's....INSPIRATION!
@_@ *runs off to draw*
20 May 2003 09:22:03
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evan |
MORE ACTION YEAH! but the bad guy did a splitz in the air glllllllllllll
24 May 2003 21:54:50
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SSDragon |
AHHHHHH! Much better. You can almost feel the strike now with that illistration.
29 May 2003 00:11:38
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Anonymous |
WOW!!!!!! I'm speachless.
10 Nov 2003 08:59:49
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bb |
Dude is he naked?
11 Feb 2004 09:20:21
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vegeta |
unreal
02 Jul 2004 17:34:06
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Kitori |
02 Oct 2004 05:42:04
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Kitori |
dang the mouse slipped, but awsome pictures! Is this guy nakid? he's hot! I love how it is related to DBZ style art, very cute.
02 Oct 2004 05:43:10
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warpathes 2000 |
very good work on the kick. nice attention to detail with the aura, most people dont think about that as very important, but you seem to have taken a long time getting the scale of it. It is very reminisent of ssj4 goku, a definant plus. overall exelently done, but the evil one could use some clothes. *chuckle* some minor detail flaws in the muscles, but i like how the hair flows.
25 Feb 2005 03:33:28
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B_layk |
nice action, great looking kick
18 Jun 2005 07:22:10
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niky-chan |
that's stupid, but I like it. this manga is like dragonball z, be more original, but i love it, i love it
05 Aug 2005 06:41:15
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Anonymous |
04 Jan 2006 16:57:03
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Vampire |
Wuz up I like your catoon it extremly good. If you get something new email me. I like the idea.
02 May 2006 14:23:50
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gonzalo |
hola
31 May 2006 01:56:41
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